Hello! Need to re-write and organize my essay to make it up to professors’ standards. 
Please update references and make the essay more in depth. 
I will quote him on what needs to be done ” This needs more depth in every area. It needs more citations, a References page, and to follow the APA format which you can find at the APA Style page.  Here is a link to the APA Style page that covers in-text citations. This needs a lot of work to bring it up to meet the standards expected of the final submission. “