I have a really rough draft and i need someone who has experience with admission esssays to give me critique and fix up the vocabulary and grammer and make it feel more genuine. I want a lot of effort put into this since it is going to ivy league schools.

The purpose of this assignment is to plan and practice a personal change to support your efforts to lead change in yourself and others successfully. You will implement and experience the Personal Change Challenge using the concepts presented in the Influencer text and the Blind and Outnumbered Video on YouTube. The final deliverables will include your completed Personal Change Challenge worksheet (form…

Find an article about an organization that either successfully or unsuccessfully implemented a Big Data program in their organization. You may also use an organization you are familiar with as a source. Write a paper analyzing the organization’s implementation of Big Data. Use the following format to guide your analysis: What problem was Big Data…

Objective: To understand hospital deficiencies and compliance issues Instructions: After reading this weeks chapters and the assigned article, prepare a signature assignment on hospital deficiencies. Access the Hospitals page of the Centers for Medicare and Medicaid Services: . Scroll down to Related Links and review the available reports. Create and submit a two- to four-page paper…

Need a discussion post for the following lecture on Feb 17. https://us02web.zoom.us/rec/share/_3rXNFOxeFdTJsnsYX6rtZGquaEU67Y8-1abZAFld5vauI-Wm_JkcUh4QVhn61D9.SCTX953KRk1g_pw3

sources  Primary Sources: *The 4 photos in "Forgetting, Misremembering, and Contesting Memories"– http://www.encyclopedia.chicagohistory.org/pages/410075.html  Secondary Source + "The City as Artifact" by Thomas Schlereth: http://www.encyclopedia.chicagohistory.org/pages/288.html

Topic: the importance of obeying lawful and just orders from Non-Commissioned Officers, Officers, and those in Leadership positions above me I’m in the army use of military terms would be probably good

Generational Trauma and the Impacts of Family History Essay Two For Essay two, please consider the ways in which Stillman explores trauma. For this essay, you will take a position on the roles of familial trauma and history that take part in the construction of one’s identity. In Sarah Stillman’s “Hiroshima: The Inheritance of Trauma”,…

Create a news story. You may use up to two quotes but the crowds are combined must not total more than 50 words. Make it a story. Dont say Charlene was interviewed. Find a news angle.   Makeup any details about it. Dont make it a profile piece. We are not learning about the person. They are…

I don’t believe there is a word count requirement.  You will have your introduction paragraphs (2 I believe), then you need 10 sources to explain.  Each source needs to have 2 paragraphs for it.  One summarizes the source and the other explains how it would be used in a future hypothetical research paper about this…