Title – Cited correctly, Creative not 1984 Essay

               Intro  -    4-5 sentences, 40+ words, includes title/author, thesis                           
               Thesis – strong, clear, on topic, correct placement at the end of the intro  

                             paragraph, 2 pronged cm                                           
               Body Paragraph #1 – Shaffer/multi paragraph format, 85+ words,
                                                  8 sentences, TLQ, strong cds, (2 direct quotations 
                                                  punctuation) from text
                                                  insightful cm                     
               Body Paragraph #2 – Shaffer/multi paragraph format, 85+ words,
                                                  8 sentences, TLQ, strong cds, (2 direct quotations 
                                                  punctuation) from text
                                                  insightful cm                     
               Conclusion  – Four sentences min., all cm (Reiterate thesis with different   

                                    cm, universal statement, tie in hook with a sense of closure)                                                                                         
               Vocabulary – powerful word choice, avoid redundancy, 
               Grammar/Mechanics –  present tense verbs, sentence variety, correct
                           punctuation, capitalization, avoid awkward sentences, contractions,   
                           I/you, fence words (should, could, would).