Peyton, in a couple of places, you’ve plagiarized from the education guide. That’s something you absolutely can’t do. If you love the phrasing, then quote it and attribute it. For the lead, consider dropping the reader into the exhibit, as many of the examples I shared with you do. (Also, use the model review I shared on Canvas to help you.) Also, be careful about accuracy. You’ll see notes and specifics in the margins. Please let me know if you have any questions. We’ll work on these tomorrow in time for you to revise for next week.

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