For this assignment, you will revise your introduction from last week based on your feedback AND you will add your first body paragraph. The two paragraphs should be submitted as a single document. 

Use the feedback you received on your outline and on the introduction to make any necessary improvements for these two paragraphs. The following elements must be included in your submission: 

Introduction:

• Start your essay with a hook designed to quickly engage the reader.
• Introduce the larger controversy that you will be weighing in on.
• Provide any necessary background information to bring your reader up to speed on what you have chosen to present as an argument. This will vary depending on your topic and may include elements such as definitions, statistics, a brief history on your topic, etc.
• Close your introduction with your thesis statement.

First body paragraph:

• Begin your body paragraph with a topic sentence that clearly introduces the subtopic of the paragraph and advances the argument in your thesis statement.
• Provide logical, relevant supporting points in support of your topic sentence and elaborate on each supporting point.
• Use evidence from reliable, academic sources to support your argument, but make sure your paragraph does not rely entirely on research. Also, argue using your own logic.
• When using information from your sources, paraphrase carefully rather than quoting word for word.

This assignment must be submitted in APA style. Make sure to use APA format, cite any outside sources within the text, and include any references that you used at the end.