Admission essay

I need 550 words for my personal statement essay and I have written most if it but I need it to be cleaner and need rewriting and expanding on the ideas I have presented. I would also appreciate any writing that can add on to my essay to make it more qualified for admission. 

Below I have attached what I wrote so far. Please help me rewrite it and expand. Thank you so much. 

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