I am applying for transfer to Texas A&M University. 

I need to answer one of the U.S. transfer custom questions for Texas A&M University: 

Diversity

Texas A&M University believes that diversity is an important part of academic excellence and that it is essential to living our core values. Describe the benefits of diversity and inclusion for you and for the Texas A&M campus community. Please share any personal experiences that have shaped your views.

Please help me rewrite my short answer essay, and make my paper clearer, more specific, and succinct than before.  

Thanks a lot!